Heya Ross, I think your pitch is really great and very well produced but you seemed to repeat a lot of information my understanding was that the video is meant to be ‘here is my idea’ and the blog post is you going into it in more detail?
I think the good thing about your idea is that you’re not trying to be funny, this is just a thing you like and have a lot of information on which is really good in terms of niche.
Only issue was that the background music was just a touch too loud.
I think its really great first pitch though!
Hey Bella, I really liked your pitch and I think the video was so well produced, pop off with your premier pro skills! I think you’re idea is super interesting. Your schedule is really good and it’ll help you keep on track once you’re handling a discord group. I would have liked it to be a bit more personal though’ like why is this your niche and what have you learnt from RP-ing in these groups so far?
Hey Alysha. your blog is very aesthetic and well made. I think this is very interesting cause a lot of Tiktokers have started getting onto Vogue and the Adison Rae was… interesting. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PnjKalUkDH4&t=1s&ab_channel=miiasaurous I think your topic is really interesting and you’re going in a really interesting direction with it. Are you also going to talk about plus-size fashion? Its very hard to thrift as anything other than size 8-12, so i think that could be an interesting/important issue.
Reflection: there is nothing I hate more than giving comments to people. I am nothing but a fool and my comments further prove that. I obviously have blog envy, I only ever use this site during these classes and it shows! I am also not an asshole? Why be needlessly mean when I can say they have nice blog instead?
The Flaming Potato's (or Brooklyn's) blog for class 